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‘ write mechanix’
© tutorials:
Improve skills, stretch the imagination; define, reach
and hold your audience NOW...
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extend your
individual writing potential |
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create your own deadlines then achieve
them |
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active professional
participation in the support and development of your own
unique talents |
IT’S TRUE THAT WRITING CAN SOMETIMES BE A SOLITARY
PROFESSION. You sit by your screen and your
loved one(s) leave you. While nothing can quite replace the exhilaration of
composing a story, too often you need inspiration or feedback, something that
will spark your writing, hone your craft and support you as you grapple and
mould your work...
Write Mechanix on-line
tutorial service—a series of discussions and exercises balanced to maximise anyone’s
story-telling abilities.
So there can’t be any chance to ever be alone over
the keyboard ever again...
write
mechanix writer
development plans
DESIGNED AND EXTENSIVELY TESTED AND CONFIRMED
over more than a decade of writing and teaching by senior
university lecturer and professional cross-media writer David Young, the
tutorials work to:
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develop each writer’s abilities through a practical
structured learning program |
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imbue confidence in
being able to handle effectively any writing assignment or task |
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heighten each writer’s perception to analyse
their own work |
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help each writer identify the strengths and
weaknesses of their own particular style |
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offer a gateway to future publication and/or
production |
All tutorials were developed from a series of
master-classes, seminars and lectures delivered at degree and post-graduate
levels throughout a variety of major tertiary institutions across Australia.
Thousands of students seem to have benefited from the
colour and scope of each module, and many progressed into full-time professional
writing careers. Here are some of the subjects now being offered exclusively by Write
Mechanix for discussion:
Editorial
Responsibility And Market Orientation:
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what is a concept and is it different to an
idea? |
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structuring |
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intent |
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purpose |
(designing transparent communications)
Subtext:
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in "show" mode you can stack up any
motives: entertainment through the planned leading of audiences
expectations |
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why life rarely seems messy on the screen |
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in any dynamic scene, what creates
interpersonal tension? |
(we know what you mean, and we’re
smiling,
because we’ve predicted you and have an agenda to offer)
Comedy - Theme (1):
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projection and the absurdity of the human
condition |
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how deep is the joke? |
(does the gag ever end?..)
You could say it’s a heady trip, but maybe writing
was always meant to be that way. And the synthesis of these courses has been
designed especially for Write Mechanix, and are available only on the Write
Mechanix site. Such is the price of admission...
write on structures:
EACH COURSE is comprised of 9 modules structured to
lead the participant through an evolving complexity of craft skills and analytic
techniques.
They can be digested as ‘one-off’ aperitifs,
springboards for future composition or as analytic filters for major works
already in progress...
All participants can take as much time as they require
to finish each of the modules, with each module e-mailed to them as needed.
Each course runs concurrently, but all modules in each
must be attempted sequentially in order for each participant to achieve a
maximum benefit of application and style...
The sequencing of the modules are designed to lead the
writer into a defined method of creation, where their individual writing process
is maximised so that the first draft is reasonably assured to be the right
draft...
Here are a few examples: activate your pens...
(from)
Creative Writing
1.5
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examine an object of your choosing closely,
take your impressions of it and its semiotic values then list them |
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devise a story-outline, working through a
three-movement structure, that empresses the theme of the object in some
way (it doesn't have to be literal) |
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define character(s) that can, through their
attributes, resonate with the object in terms of their necessity for
development |
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choose a landscape that is symbolically
resonant of the theme of the object, the character imperatives and
consequently the storyline |
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plan how to move through the narrative, what
focus you intend to take at any point in it (1st, 3rd person, God,
monologue, stream-of-consciousness, dialogue) and note these down on
your story framework |
(from)
Creative Writing
2.3
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100-200 words |
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sentences per paragraph 1-3 |
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describe a character at a point of moral
crisis, where their perception of reality threatens to make them betray
their beliefs or ideals |
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if you wish, extend your draft of the exercise |
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find 1 immediately contemporary cultural icon
(object or media) that projects an image of some aspect of humanity as a
stereotype |
(from)
Scripting 1.3
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Develop a theme. Choose an issue or concern
about the human condition that has pertinence to you. Think about it in
general, almost mythical terms. Express it in a single sentence. |
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Define 3 characters whose interaction can
exemplify the theme. In no more than 3 paragraphs, describe how this
interaction takes place, leaving it open-ended (ie. there is no
resolution, only a description of their interpersonal dynamic) |
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In one paragraph, define a general setting
(location, time, season) that resonates with both the characters and the
theme. |
(from)
Scripting 2.2
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200 words |
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define a story where 2 main characters have to
band together to face a common threat (probably beyond their control) |
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define the moment when the threat seems ready
to destroy them |
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turn this into an ‘action’ sequence |
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list the elements and details that occur in
this sequence in hierarchical order of impact |
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write the scene (no dialogue, present tense) |
(from)
Writing
and Editing for Publication 1.1
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develop an imaginary concept that is applicable
to the organisation you are currently working in (ie.
policy/product/evaluation). |
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outline this concept in no more than 300 words
in 3 stages |
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- definition/premise |
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- expansion/implication/argument |
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- outcome/inference/conclusion |
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make a list or flow-chart of the concept's
applicability to other departments or organisations in terms of
your perceived evaluation of them. |
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re-examine your outline and alter accordingly |
Phew...
But there’s no word length, there’s no pressure. No
‘pass’, ‘fail’, or ‘maybe’. Literary democracy lies in the attempt.
All that’s required is a commitment to making yourself become the best writer
you can possibly be, and complete as much as you can.
Hopefully, each participant can turn around and e-mail
back to Write Mechanix each exercise completed within 14 days, so we can
comment on it at our end efficiently...
write mechanix tutorial outlines
FOLLOWING ARE THE FULL OUTLINES of the 5 courses
currently being offered by Write Mechanix. Each module in each course
runs to between 3-5 A4 pages, often with included diagrams, illustrations etc.
We recommend each participant print the modules, then
bind their exercise responses in chronological order. In this way, the full
development of the course and the participant’s response to it can be viewed
as a holistic creative process by the participant at the end of it.
Choose whatever course appeals, then prepare to
engage...
course A [ ] ‘Creative
Writing 1: Landscapes’
how we give life to the world around us
and then try to interpret its meaning...
1 .
Who'd Be A Writer? Fun, Profit And Plato's Cave...
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why write? you
and the need to say it... |
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who are you
talking to and why do you want to tell someone like them anyway? |
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if you really
want to tell them, what is the best way to say it? |
2 .
The Commonality Of Language - " I thought I
Understood And I Guess I'll Get Back To You...Soon".
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your personal
philosophy and how to make it make sense (in writing that is) |
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looking at it
from the outside - what is its shape and why are there holes? |
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what I say is not
what you understand - eyes, mouths and ears are all different... |
3 .
The Self Versus The Non-Self (And Visa-Versa)
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tension in
description - up, down, left, right so what's implied in between? |
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if I were to
describe me as someone else saw me what would it read like? |
4 .
What Is A Landscape And Why? Do We Live In It Or
Does It Live In Us And Should We Ever Give A Damn?
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they're all made
up of living and non-living things, but what do you focus on that
makes them unique? |
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these are the
things that I see which makes each landscape unique, so what does that
mean to me? |
5 .
Take This Object And Make Into A Living Thing
(Outside)
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love between
rocks/the sadness of a discarded wrapper/the frenzied enlightenment of
a microwave... |
6 .
Take This Person And Explain What They Mean
(Inside)
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all the emotions
stacked like cards/all the thoughts created for an end/all physical
action defined for a purpose... |
7 .
Time, Space, Things Happen And All That Jazz
(Contrapuntal Harmony Summarised).
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in the beginning
was the beginning, in the end was the beginning of the next end. |
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in between,
objects and animals and people collide, generally for a purpose, where
someone or something decides to act. |
8 .
Here It Is From Heaven, Here It Is From The Ant,
So Who's Wearing The Sunglasses?
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from the top of
the mountain, you can describe the pattern as a pattern, on the ground
looking up you never know what's going to happen next |
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is any one view
better, different, easier, more correct? |
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can you be in
both places at the same time? |
9 .
The Grand Composition (Flowers And Mutations) -
How Do You Cut And Why Isn't It More Painless?
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no real answers
here, just taste, style, aspects of all of the above and, of course
the writing... |
course B [ ] ‘Creative
Writing 2: The Fictive Self’
authors in time, history and culture:
what are the elements of narrative that are universal?
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Spirit
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shards of
meaning in the 90’s |
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personal will
in immediate space/time |
2 .
Archetypes And The Parliament Of Selves
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how does drama
internally manifest itself, as a configuration of personaes? |
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what personaes
within have, and always have been, human and eternal |
3 .
Zeitgeist (Before And After)
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the information
culture: ‘modern-speak’ and its implication to thought and
feeling |
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honesty within
a community in retraction |
4 .
Synchronicity
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internal theme
and the shaping towards resolution by ‘coincidental’ resonance |
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fate, destiny
and is there a quantum physics of language? |
5 .
Time
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the collapse of
history in the post-modern world |
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does truth
always exist now? |
6.
Dramatics
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an unfolding
impact of understanding on the Self |
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what do we
learn from our agendas and dreams? |
7
. God
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as narrative
device, or fundament? |
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the necessity
and implications of ‘sacrifice’ |
8 .
Ecology
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inter-dependence
of meaning within and without the Self |
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landscapes
revisited in all preceding contexts |
9 .
Synthesis
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balance within
a ‘fictional’ universe |
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the scope of
the Self within it |
course C [ ] ‘Scriptwriting
1: Mechanics’
the clockwork of forming then tuning a
professional script—
step by step instructions
1 .
What Does A Script Do?
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show not tell |
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the suspension
of disbelief: virtual realities and why people buy tickets |
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engagement and
identification - who said these were passive mediums? |
2 .
Theme
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is it a message
is it an intent, and how does it glue the whole thing together? |
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commercial
considerations - why there are trends and why they should be for
accounted for |
3 .
Characterisation
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real people
don't just talk about it: how to show character through action |
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the character
who learns versus the character who's static: what do audiences
expect of these personals and why? |
4 .
Subtext
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in
"show" mode you can stack up any motives: entertainment
through the planned leading of audiences expectations |
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why life rarely
seems messy on the screen |
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in any dynamic
scene, what creates interpersonal tension? |
5 .
Mis-En-Scene/Action-Reaction
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why should
characters move through their world, what does it reveal about them,
how does this create structure and why does this increase our level
of engagement? |
6 .
Act Structure
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moving a story
line to define plot points |
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balance and
weighting of movement and character: how to determine it there is a
need to shift focus |
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sequencing and
their styles; exposition, interaction and ambience |
7 .
The Scripting Process
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the single line
grab/a complete 1 page synopsis/plot point scene by scene/act
structure. Why bother to go through all this and why does it protect
the writer from grief. |
8 .
The Dialogue Draft
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interaction,
subtext, inference: why do characters open their mouths in the first
place. |
9 .
Editing
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cutting for
pace, cutting for suspense, cutting for groove - the ins and outs of
the ins and outs of any scene. |
course D [ ] ‘Scriptwriting
2: Genre’
the conventions of common filmic forms
and how to uncover the ‘rules’ determining audience expectations...
1 .
Genre: A Formalised Setup
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what is popular
narrative structure? |
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how does an
audience’s expectation define genre? |
2 .
Suspense - Sequencing (1)
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how is suspense
constructed? |
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why does it give us
thrills? |
3 .
Suspense - Sequencing (2)
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doubt and paranoia |
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reversals and
misfortunes |
4 .
Suspense - Character (1)
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rites of passage |
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the contagonist as
mirror/foil |
5 .
Comedy - Character (1)
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the absurdity of the
human condition |
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why we need to laugh |
6 .
Comedy - Theme (1)
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projection |
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how deep is the joke? |
7 .
Transcendence - Theme (1)
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affirmation |
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what elements shape
such a narrative path? |
8 .
Transcendence - Character (1)
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‘ennoblement’ |
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identification,
character, theme |
9 .
Genre - Conclusion
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market scope |
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post-analysis of
audience expectations |
course E [ ] ‘Writing
and Editing for Publication’
document construction and realisation
for all professional applications:
language, structure and design:
1 .
Editorial Responsibility And Market Orientation
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what is a concept
and is it different to an idea? |
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structuring |
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intent |
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purpose |
2 .
Readership
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audience/reader
analysis |
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functionality |
2 .
Thematic Structure For Proof
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thematic values |
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subtext |
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setup,
expansion, denouement |
4 .
Proof design
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inferred
proof of theme |
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common
structural problems |
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hierarchy
of headings |
5 .
Forms
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departmental
and ministerial communication |
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submissions |
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reports |
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press
releases |
6 .
Harmonisation Of Document Language Style
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familiarity of word
patterns to the reader |
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long
sentences |
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sentence
strategies |
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house styles |
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language level |
7 .
Publication Design
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definition
by intent |
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definition
by strategy |
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definition
by budget |
8 .
Strategies
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document aids and
pre-planning |
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framework
design |
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document
development |
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structural
devices |
9 .
Form And Markup
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function |
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form |
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design
and conceptualisation |
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page
layout |
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copyright |
costs:
AS A NEW SERVICE FOR 2000 ,
Write Mechanix offers an introductory cost for enrolments—$290.00 for
non-members / $180.00 for Write Mechanix members.
This includes:
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full on-line
evaluation and comments of exercises from the Write Mechanix staff |
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access
for exercises to be published in the Write Mechanix ezine and annual
CD |
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reduced
full manuscript appraisal fees |
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automatic
entry (given evaluation) into the Dymocs awards |
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access
to Write Mechanix agency representation (subject to work appraisal) |
enrolments:
(Further information TBA but here’s the tag...)
write mechanix
tutorials
course outline copyright david young 2000 and before
Phone 02 6254 2917
no words can ever be written unless they’re
meant...
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